Title: A Deal with the Enemy
Series: A Prizm Books Short
Author: Jessica Ennis
Genre: Paranormal Romance
Length: Short Story (17 pages)
Publisher: Torquere Press (October 2013)
Heat Level: Mild
Heart Rating: ♥♥2Hearts
Blurb: All-American Brenden has a crush on the weird boy at school. Brenden’s best friend Alex is also gay, so that’s not the problem. The problem is that Alex hates Brenden’s crush with a fiery passion. Can he prove to Brenden that he’s a good enough friend to support Brenden, no matter what?
The price may be more than he or Brenden are willing to pay, though, when Brenden’s crush stumbles upon their deadly secret and nearly dies in the process.
Product Link: http://www.torquerebooks.com/index.php?main_page=product_info&cPath=83&products_id=4032
Review: Short. Why yes, yes we are missing two colors there, aren’t we.
Brendan has a crush on Alan, I think, and he doesn’t want his best friend Alex to know. Alex doesn’t like Alan very much, but he wants to support his friend. Then somehow, they all end up in a tunnel or the subway, and then you learn all the friends have a secret that could be deadly. Okay now someone is having sex against the wall in the dark tunnel, and it’s a little bit sexy BUT, I still couldn’t really tell you who was having sex.
I read this book, twice, and I’m still confused. The names of characters ran together and even after two runs, I couldn’t completely tell them apart. The author went from using first names to last names and there were entirely too many characters for 17 pages.
This seems to be more of a draft for a book than an actual book. I’m sorry guys but this one did not work for me.