O Christmas Three by Suzan Butler

o-christmas-three3Title: O Christmas Three

Author: Suzan Butler

Genre: Contemporary, MMF

Length: Novella

Publisher: Soaring Phoenix Press ( November 1st, 2012)

Heat: Explicit

Heart: ♥♥♥3Hearts

Reviewer: Cam

Blurb: Garrett and Brianna Zane have the perfect marriage on the surface. They share everything from love to their wildest sexual desires with ease. So when Brianna confesses she wants a threesome with his best friend Leobardo Vasquez, it awakens feelings Garrett has long tried to forget.

But the smoldering attraction between Leo and Brianna is hard to deny and even harder to dismiss when it’s all he can think about, especially when the three are trapped together in Leo’s cabin during a snowstorm. Seducing Leo will test their relationship, reveal old secrets, and maybe tear them apart. While there may be room for Leo in bed, there may not be room for a third in their marriage.

Purchase Link: http://www.smashwords.com/books/view/252915

Review: This plot will appeal to anyone who is a true believer in polyamory. The three characters spend the entire book getting hot with each other within the limitations of two bisexual males and one very hetero female but emotions don’t really get mentioned until the last few chapters. I felt very sorry for Leo. Despite being a likeable character, the impossibly perfect Brianna had set her predatory sights on him and as was mentioned many times – What Bri wants, Bri gets. An utter spoilt bitch in other words.

So the plot was OK even if one of the three characters was despicable (I got the feeling I was supposed to understand her feelings, I didn’t)  The sex was good. No punches pulled even though the way those three were going at it the author must have needed a thesaurus by the end. What ruined the book for me was very bad editing. Points of view were changed with no notice and the number of typos was bad.. With two men involved, I had to keep checking back to see if the “he” referred to was Leo or Garrett because the transition of POV was not clear at all.