Wouldn't It Be Good by Logan Zachary

1219013Title: Wouldn’t It Be Good

Series: An MLR Mixed Tape
  

Author: Logan Zachary
 

Genre: Contemporary Romance/ Erotica

Length: Short Story (6,000 words)

Publisher: MLR Press (June 7th, 2013)

Heat Level: Explicit

Heart Rating: ♥♥2Hearts

Blurb: Jock jumps out of the closet.

Product Link:  http://www.mlrbooks.com/ShowBook.php?book=LZWDNBGD

Reviewer:   Gigi

Review: I think this theme of the football star coming out of the closet to rescue and admit his undying love for the beaten down gay geek, was too much for a short story. The sexual content seems to be off somehow. possibly is was meant to be imagined through the POV of an inexperienced young adult, but then one of the MCs comes off as a master of deep throat fellatio. It was a good try, but there was not enough length to the story to make all the pieces fit.