Flurry by Alyson May Bristol

51Z5iHv2JJL._SX311_BO1,204,203,200_Title: Flurry
Series: The White Wolves, #1
Author: Alyson May Bristol
Genre: Paranormal/ Shapeshifter
Length: 77 pages
Publisher: Alyson May Bristol (May 3, 2015)
Heat Level: Moderate
Heart Rating: ♥♥ 2 Hearts
Blurb: The white wolf.

It’s rumored to stalk the mountains surrounding Park City. When one man comes face-to-face with the creature, he finds there’s more to the wolf than meets the eye.

Noah is in hiding. A wolf shifter trying desperately to fit in with the human world. While on a ski trip in Park City, Utah, he is forced to show his true form to a friend from college. What he doesn’t realize, is he may have stumbled upon his fated mate.

Joshua is a Mormon college boy, excited to go on his first trip away from home. When he’s thrust into the dark world of wolf shifters, everything he believes is shaken.

As he learns about the white wolves that haunt his dreams, Josh realizes that his feelings for his friend Noah span more than just friendship.

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Reviewer: Lisa

Review: This is a new author for me so I was not sure what to expect. However the story starts out pretty good at first, but then it just goes downhill. This story comes off like a brand new story by a beginner and has a lot of serious editing needed. It had great potential, but the follow thru was not very good. This turned out to be a very strange story with a bad cliffhanger.

Josh and his friends are going skiing and spending time with each other. He sees a white wolf and things just go downhill for him. Then there are his feelings for Noah, and things start to heat up. Then he finds out that Noah is a werewolf.

It went really downhill the moment they started being called young boy, when both were the same age. There was also no romance unless you count one encounter in the snow. This story was just lacking all the way around but I must admit that it had potential, if the author had taken the time with it. I want to see if book two will be any better but after reading this I am not sure if I want to take the chance.

I was disappointed in this story.

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