My Immortal by Storm Savage

4190MYIMMORTAL510-430x645Title: My Immortal

Series: Perfect Strangers, Book 3

Author: Storm Savage

Length: Novella (88 Pages)

Publisher: Extasy Books (November 1st, 2013)

Heat Level: Very Low

Heart Rating: ♥♥♥3 Hearts

Reviewer: Lisa

Blurb: A gorgeous man—a cursed hybrid—heaven sent and hell bound. Only one choice can save them.

Talon is possibly the only hybrid of his kind—half vampire, half eagle shifter. Bitten and killed by a vampire when he was a shifter, Talon has been in holding for a long time, condemned by both realms. When he meets the man who dropped the veil between worlds, Talon struggles to do the right thing. He must resist his thirst for blood long enough to redeem his shifter form.

When Kohl unearths a rare artifact on an excavation, he is consumed by nightmares that lead him to dangerous places. Drawn by a mystical force, he cannot stop himself from wanting the gorgeous man in his dreams. Talon’s allure is both thrilling and terrifying.

Can Talon win Kohl’s love before blood-lust seals his fate?

Product Link:  http://www.extasybooks.com/my-immortal/

Review: This story is good. A little bit difficult to follow, but is still good. Kohl is a sweet and gentle man, who unearths a rare artifact that leads him to Talon. Talon is a strong and loyal eagle shifter who was attacked by a vampire, now a half vampire half shifter. Bound to a realm, until set free by true love.

This story has a great story line with love and the desire for freedom. The plot is good, but leaves me wondering a lot of about many things. It gives you the how part of Talon’s life, but leaves you guessing about Kohl’s life. It was just too fast, the love Kohl felt. It was not as believable as I would have liked. The spark between them was hot, as was the sex; however it just left me wondering. I did like Kohl and Talon though. They both come off sweet, tender and who could not fall in love with both of them.

I liked the story, but wished it had a little more to it.