Title: Takes What He Wants
Author: Layla Laguna
Genre: Erotica / Forced Seduction
Length: Short Story (39 pages)
ASIN: B00G3GID9U
Publisher: Layla Laguna (October 21st, 2013)
Heat Level: Explicit
Heart Rating: ♥♥♥ 3 Hearts
Reviewer: Thommie
Blurb:Jason loves women, especially married, vulnerable women, making sport of stealing them right from under the noses of their weak and oblivious husbands. At the supermarket, he makes the mistake of running afoul of a cockblocking alpha male who isn’t too keen on going along with Jason’s little game and lets him know just what he’ll have to do to strike a bargain.
As the saying goes, real men take what they want…
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Review: So this is a forced seduction short story, made to entice your fantasy and well… play with your libido. It was 50% successful at that for me, but it failed miserably with its beginning.
Jason out of nowhere makes eye contact with a gorgeous women and follows her around at the market place. Unfortunately, the lady appears married with a gym-rat beefy guy who noticed Jason’s strutting right in front of him and practically flirting with his female.
Yeah, it had a real alpha male, me-kill-you vibe and that’s how it played and moved on. What I dislike was the fact that Jason is a real jerk of a man, and frankly I thought his punishment wasn’t much of a punishment since in the end he seemed to enjoy it a bit too much. He went with the idea that he was man enough to grab somebody’s wife right under his nose and rub it in as well, so yes, I was very glad John followed him and sorted it out like “real men”.
So plot-wise, come on you can’t really expect much on such a short story. Erotic-wise, hmm I enjoyed it. It was fun and the ending was brilliant. It was so worth reading this story just for that parting line, it made me howl with laughter. Writing style, I thought it was pretty decent, but it definitely needed editing and proofing before going out on sale.
To sum it up, it was okay for a freebie and definitely worth reading for the ending itself.