Series: Hiding In Plain Sight, #1
Author: Megan Slayer
Length: Novella (104 pages)
Publisher: MLR Press, LLC (April 6th 2015)
Heat Level: Moderate
Heart Rating: ♥♥♥ 3 Hearts
Blurb: He can levitate objects and predict the future, but no one knows his powers…until he finds a man worth fighting for.
He can levitate objects and predict the future, but no one knows his powers…until he finds a man worth fighting for.
Chase Bender moves objects with his mind and can read the immediate future. If anyone found out the man behind the mask had a lot in common with the regular man character, they wouldn’t believe him. What’s a man with super hero abilities supposed to do to get a date?
Dylan Foreman isn’t interested in jumping into the dating pool, but can’t deny the attraction when he meets Chase. Can the burning lust between a simple book-keeper and a man in spandex, and sporting a cape really last?
Purchase Link: http://www.mlrbooks.com/ShowBook.php?book=MSSPHERO
Review: This book started out so great. The writing was on point and the pacing was just right. I liked both main characters Chase and Dylan, along with Dylan’s son Nathan. The story was engaging and entertaining. The two men had good connection and things were looking good.
Both Chase and Dylan have been hurt in the past and are slowly getting to know each other. Plus Dylan needs to look out for his son. They are both sweet and gentlemen looking for someone to love. And I was really digging that.
Right after their first sex scene things started just not jiving the same way. Everything seemed to speed up and the flow of the beginning was gone. Things happened that just didn’t really need to in my opinion. They added angst that just did not work for me. It was too fake and convenient. And one made no sense at all. They really just annoyed me. Even the dialogue was off.
It had such great promise in the start. And it was still a cute story in the long run. But certain things with other people outside the relationship just bogged it down. I was on my way to loving this book and then boom, a couple of what the hell moments.
So all in all, a cute and sweet story with a few execution issues.
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