The Layover by C.V. Madison

20552349Title: The Layover

Series: Part of the Buckle Down Anthology

Author: C. V. Madison

Genre: BDSM/Contemporary/ Cowboys/ Erotic Romance

Length: Novella (39 Pages)

ISBN:JGPI2014055-CVM1

Publisher: Jupiter Garden Press (February 6th, 2014)

Heat Level: Explicit

Heart Rating: ♥♥♥ 3 Hearts

Reviewer: Lisa

Blurb:Security expert and avowed city boy Reno Locke drops into The Meeting Place for a little loving to fill his off hours. Country boy Wilder Henderson swings through to blow off a little steam after winning a rodeo competition. Locke finally works up the nerve to hit on Wilder and Locke takes Wilder back to his room. He finds out this urban cowboy is just what he was looking for during his layover.

Purchase Link: http://jupitergardenspress.com/shop/the-layover/

Review: I absolutely loved this story. It was funny as hell, kept my laughing throughout it. I really wished it were longer though. I wanted to hear more about Wilder and Locke. To hear if they reconnect in New York.

Wilder and Locke met in a little bar and hit it off. One security expert and a country boy rocked the sheets for one hot night full of sex. They have the strengths and weaknesses that balance together and it makes you want them more each time you read it.

It is a really cute story. The only problem I had with it was that it left me hanging. It did keep my attention from start to end. If you want a really cute story that is a fast read, this would be the one to pick…

Sebastian's Submission by Gina Duncan

18461159Title: Sebastian’s Submission

Series: Shared Desires #2

Author: Gina Duncan

Genre: Erotica (contains a scene of a female masturbation)

Length: Novelette (57 pages)

Publisher: Jupiter Gardens Press (September 5th, 2013)

Heat Level: Moderate

Heart Rating: ♥♥1.5 Hearts

Reviewer: Thommie

Blurb: Sebastian had never thought about being submissive to anyone before the sexy Gavin Sanborn had proposed the idea to him one day in his Bistro. Now that the idea and opportunity was there, he was intrigued enough to learn more. Sebastian definitely wanted Gavin. The only problem was Sebastian also wanted the one woman he’d denied for most of their lives, his best friend, and housemate, Carissa.

Gavin had wanted the owner and chef of his favorite Bistro for some time now, but he’d also had his attention on the chef’s lady friend. The fiery red head had captured him from the first time he set eyes on her. Gavin had been looking for the person he could love and spend the rest of his life with; he just wondered if one or both of them could be the solution and become the love he’d been looking for.

Product Link: http://jupitergardenspress.com/shop/shared-desires-book-2-sebastians-submission/

Review: Whoa there Nelly! This relatively short read surprised the heck out of me with its beginning. If it wasn’t the most forward and shocking way to introduce your main characters. I liked it! Unfortunately, there is where all enjoyment ends.

First, let’s get to the BDSM element I expected to see. Both title and blurb give you that impression; however, there was a complete lack of any BDSM-related scene in this book. It couldn’t be more vanilla if it tried to. We expected to see a Dom claiming a submissive with whom he’d eventually fall for and turn this relationship into something more… Instead, we got a Dom who makes a move on a person who has no relation with kink or any D/s scenes, doesn’t even know what a submissive really is, and jumps into agreeing to sign a “contract” with a man he just met and only dated/had sex with once. All the while, he has no comprehension of what a contract, as this man’s sub would entail. I mean literally Gavin mentions a contract signing to a person who has no idea what entails to be a sub, and Sebastian doesn’t bat an eye at that. No reaction! Simply continues the conversation… Hmmm! Now why do I not like this?

We also get the expectation of a threesome between Gavin, Sebastian, and Carissa. It’s there in the subtext and Riss is a constant in Sebastian and Gavin’s mind. However, beside a masturbation scene, we see nothing from Riss. Just her presence and I suppose the next book will feature her and the boys as they try to get her in their setup.

As for the erotic part of this “erotica,” I’m afraid it totally failed to touch me. The scenes between the two men were simple enough, but they lacked sensuality, intensity, and connection in every sense. A bland narration had me cringing most of the time with the insensible dialogues between them, the visuals that crashed and burned, and the fact that the erotic was overcome by hasty feelings of love. There was no actual space for deeper emotions here, yet they made an appearance and overwhelmed a text that was already a bit ludicrous to begin with. In addition, the only part I felt had a nice description that allowed for some hot visual and imagination, was the end scene when Riss and Gavin finally meet and I got a proper glimpse at what Gavin really looks like, because up until that point all I had of him was tall, dark, and handsome with long black hair.

Bottom end, I did not like this book. It failed to capture me or make me feel any other emotion beside disbelief.